Wednesday, July 21, 2010

Final three cinquains

Three final cinquains by Evelyn Coffey



Gray mist,

Speared with moonglow,

Sketched a weird silhouette

Against the fawning dusk of tall,

Gaunt trees.


* * *


Blue eyes

Hold deep-sea dreams,

Quiescent and purple

At evening, and dusted with stars

At night.


* * *


Flowers

Look to the sun

And adore him richly

In their blooming. Just so I turn

To you!



Evelyn Coffey

1 comment:

  1. These are all visual. Whose blue eyes, I wonder. Hers were, I think. But in the final poem, her lower-case "him" and "you" seem to suggest a terrestrial beloved. Ahh, that mystery of Evelyn!

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